First issue
sentance 1 switches wikipedia and washington but keeps the sentance intact otherwise.
2
Took the second sentace removed some words and braceted information and changed "flattering verbage" to "flattering words"
3
Took the last sentance from the source and cut out some information information.
Revised version
Wikipedia and its volunteer editors have discovered some political meddling in their service. Reprenative Marty Meehan in a interview with the Lowell Sun Newspaper discussed altering his own Wikipedia entry to potray a more sutable public image. As a result Wikipedia had disallowed any acess to its service for computers dealing with the House of Represenatives on Capatol Hill.
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